Bradley+Li

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My Story 1. Some of the big ideas that included into this story is its voice. I really put some of my own feelings and tried to voice out some of my personalities in this piece I found myself sometimes wrapped up in the making. It almost made everything seem real to me even though it is fiction. I also think that it includes some identity and experimentation since I have never really tried to write many stories this is one of my first

2. Many elements are also present in this piece like I said voice is a good one it really gives the reader a good view. This piece also has some careful planning which i had used in order to keep the readers enticed even though in the broader picture the story was really going nowhere. Many revisions by my peers also help point out the mechanical flaws and plot mistakes that I made in writing this story. Puzzle Poem This poem really goes into the idea of creativity. I really had to experiment with all kinds of sentences and word choice. It was very hard to think of what word would match and give the poem its works. As i look back on this piece nothing really seems come back to me but that it seems very random. At the same time it some how makes sense in the eyes of writing everything just seems to flow smoothly.

For this assignment I was to make a Puzzle Poem out of chosen words. At first the process was hard in there were certain rules that I had to follow when making this poem. I started out by making a draft in parts then once i pieced it together I started to omit some of the words that didn't belong in the poem. Bradley's Memorable Moment This was a project from semester ! English I compare this story to that of My own Fiction story that I wrote in Semester 2. Some of the similarities include the voice I had in the story. The excitement the I had when I made that hole in one. What it lacks is the creativity that I put in the fiction story. Since this was a non fictional type I had a hard time trying to experiment with different styles of writing.

This story really expresses my feelings and shows how much I have developed vocabulary over my experience of writing english papers. As I look back I really see that I also expressed some creativity in making the format for this story trying out new themes that would really make this a memorable moment This story includes some ideas that was never really at first appeared. I Who am I(bradley Li) There is nothing really that fits the rubric but this piece has some voice but its really about me. This story tells about me and Yes I still love Bug Bunny awesome cartoon He really uses lots of cool and unique tricks in order to fool people but he can also be very caring at some times. Kind of represents me media type="youtube" key="a8mNg4P_uLA&hl=en" height="355"